Lee says goodnight and we’re left with Isaac who sits for a bit. We see a little bit more character development as he whips out a notepad and begins making notes. What is he writing? I don’t know if we ever get to find out really.
Month: March 2013
Trouble is My Business (page 12)
Wheee! Did I say that the conversation was wrapped up in the last page? Oh no, not yet. As per Isaac and Lee, they go over the top with everything, including weird philosophical debates. Well, this whole first story was only supposed to introduce the characters and to go for a short walk in their world. Looking back over this, I would definitely reign them in a bit here.
Trouble is My Business (page 11)
Not much to say here that hasn’t already been mentioned. Wrapping up the conversation basically.
I understand director’s commentary tracks so much more now. Sometimes you just don’t have a lot to say about a scene.
Trouble is My Business (page 10)
As one can soon find out with Isaac & Lee, the story isn’t plot driven. It’s character-driven and the characters are chatty. Very chatty. They occasionally like to go off on random topics like this one. In as much as the audience was getting to know the characters, so was I. Another note? At the time, I was unsure as to how to represent a black t-shirt without loosing the line work so I used a weird technique involving inverse colouring. Way overcomplicated now that I look back at it.